Three ways of cooking
Una
2012.10.04
These days, there are exist various food. Also, food recipe is more various. Many people want to good cook. What should we do to be a good cook? I have three easy way of cooking. Let's review about it.
The first way is that you should like cooking. Because You can learn a cooking well, if you like that. You should make people happy as your cooking and learn hard with the great enthusiasm you have in cooking.
Second way is that you should learn challenge and creativity. You will make Korean and international foods. And build your creativity. Creative activity is very important. And Not trying leads to your failure. Try our best to make your dreams come true. To achieve your dream of being a cook, you will continue to give a challenge.
The third way is that you should have honesty. It is contain various job part. If you aren't honest, you may lose faiths from the others. We must say true words more than lies not to lose believes. Ambition and knowledge are important to be the cook. However, it is more important that you have to be the person with honesty and trusty.
All three ways of cooking are useful. Besides many methods exist. You should learn about it. This is important to you. Remind about contents. Then you will be a good cook.
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ReplyDeleteHello Una. I'm Jisoo.
ReplyDeleteActually I am not good at cooking.
So your writing is helpful to me. Thank you.
And your writing's paragraph is divided well.
So I can easily understand your writing.
But I don't know relationships between honesty and cooking. Could you tell me more about that?
Una I agree with Jisoo - the relationship between cooking and honesty is unclear. You need to clarify that.
ReplyDeleteAlso the first 'way' is not really a way. It's just a statement about liking cooking. You may want to rethink your thesis and supporting arguments. Make sure you state your main points IN your thesis in the intro and conclusion.