My
Routine on Weekend(Peter,Blog3)
Peter
28/10/2012
Every
weekend I usually wake up at 12:00 AM. Because I usually play computer game or
play basketball at dawn. After getting up I always brush my teeth and wash my
face.After washing I usually eat lunch at 1:00PM. I usually go to park to play
basketball when I didn’t play basketball on Friday. I usually play basketball
about 2~3 hours. Especially, I play basketball very often, because winter has
coming. When winter has come, I can’t play basketball very much so I usually
play basketball until winter has coming. After playing basketball I usually
take a shower at 5:00PM. After take a shower I usually eat dinner with my
family at 6:00PM. After dinner I usually do my homework until I go to bed. I
usually go to bed at 12:00PM. On Sunday, I always go to church and have worship.
After worship, I usually teach children about Bible history. Almost children
don’t know exactly about Bible history, so I teach Bible history and tell a
story about Bible. But, It’s very hard to teach children because, sometimes
children can’t concentrate always. After teaching, I eat lunch at 1:00P.M. I
usually go back to home and take a rest. After rest, I usually eat dinner with
my family at 6:00PM. After dinner, I usually do my homework when I didn’t do on
Saturday. After homework I wash my face and go to bed at 12:00PM.
Peter make sure you check your times (I think you mean 12 PM, and 'Dawn' is when the sun rises in the morning).
ReplyDeleteAlso, you have some unrelated sentences - remember everything is about your routine. Finally, try to add some sensory details (sight, sound, smell, etc).
Good work.