Henny
29/10/2012
My
Daily Routine
My weekday is always same
pattern. That is because I am a student. Except Wednesday, I wake up at 8:30
A.M. After waking up, I eat breakfast, bread and glass of milk. Then, I take
the shower. When I end a shower and wear clothes, it is time to go to school. I
go to school by taking the bus. I go to my university every day from Monday to
Friday. Each day, I have two or three classes. After the classes, I come back
home and I am very tired. That’s why I take a rest about an hour. Every Monday,
Wednesday, and Friday, I go to gym. I like exercise. Also, I want to make a
physical strength. After exercising, I do my homework at home. I review what I
learned that day, too. If I do not review that day, I cannot catch up with the
class. I go to bed before 1 A.M. That is because if I go to bed after 1 A.M, I
cannot spend next day normally. I think that my routine is so boring. I want
some change in my life.
Hello Henny.
ReplyDeleteThe comma is used to separate parts of a sentence.
I think you used comma properly. Because I can understand your writing easily.
But I think you need to rewrite some sentence.
That is because I am a student. -> because I am a student.
Thank you ! Have a great weekend!
Henny, please try to combine some sentences into 1 sentence - otherwise many of them are too short. Also remember to check for articles. Last, try to add some sensory details (sight, sound, smell, etc)
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