Jisoo's daily routine
2012108035 Jisoo
Let me tell you about my daily routine.
Usually I wake up at 5:30A.M. Because I have a first class on Tuesday, Wednesday
and Tursday. But sometimes, I wake up at 9:00A.M. And I wash my face, hair and
brush my teeth. After washing, I get dressed and make up. I wear light makeup
that looks natural. Then I take the bus to school. In the bus, I eat breakfast. I
enjoy eating sweet potatoes and rice cake. Eceryday I get to school before
8:30A.M. After I get to school, I prepare for class. Then I take the class.
I have a lunch at school cafeteria. After lunch, I do brush my teeth and take the
afternoon class. Before I leave the school, I put my books in the school locker. I
After I arrive the house, I eat dinner with my family. Then I do my homework and
surf the internet. I usually go to bed at 11:30P.M.
I think regular routine is best routine. But sometimes I am sickening of my daily
routine.
Hi jisoo! I'm una. I read your essay. It is very interesting and similar to me. You are use easy words and simple sentence. So I could understand at a glance.
ReplyDeleteBut you make mistakes.
Eceryday -> Everyday
It is wrong word.
I After I arrive -> After I arrive
I think that it is just petty error.
Anyway,It is good writing!
Jisoo - you have many easy mistakes that you can correct. Please check carefully before your final draft. Also make sure it is one paragraph (format).
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