Unbin
09/30/2012
Common Ways of Going to Seokyeong University
Seokyeong university students have three common ways of going to school.
The first way is ride a bus. This way is cheapest way. Most students use this
way when they are going to school. So, the bus is so crowded in morning time.
The second way is walking. It is good way for your health. Students who live
near the school uses this method. But if you not live near by school, it is not
useful way. Because, Seokyeong university is located hill. In addition, humanities
school is stand the top of a hill.
The third way is ride a taxi. This way is very convenient way. Or If you ride a taxi
with four students it may be cheaper than the bus. But it is usual expensive way.
If you have lots of money, you can use this way everyday.
All three ways of going to Seokyeong university are very useful for freshmen.
The first way is ride a bus. This way is cheapest way. Most students use this
The third way is ride a taxi. This way is very convenient way. Or If you ride a taxi
with four students it may be cheaper than the bus. But it is usual expensive way.
If you have lots of money, you can use this way everyday.
All three ways of going to Seokyeong university are very useful for freshmen.
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ReplyDeleteHi Unbin!
ReplyDeleteI read your essay. I feel the same way about what you said. It is easy to read and understand. It was very well organized. But sentence is very short sequentially. Anyway clear and simple. Thank you
Unbin,
ReplyDelete1. You need more supporting details. It is too short
2. "Because" should not start a sentence...normally.
3. Please state a clear thesis in the intro with your main points. Also restate your main points in the conclusion