Portfolio 9
Tyler
19/09/2012
Ways of Using Smart phones
Today’s modern society, machines are too complicated to use easily. Especially, smart phones are became very useful stuff for everyone. But at first, it’s little bit difficult to handle it. There are three ways for using Smartphone to someone didn’t use it before.
The first way is reading a manual carefully. In manual, there are several categories about using tools in phones. You can see power on, how to read documents, playing music and so on. Simply, if you read manual carefully, you don’t need extra help to use.
The second way is ask someone using Smartphone. If someone uses it already, he or she already experiences what you struggle. They might don’t know how to turn on. They are your smart phone use’s senior. They might help you based about their experience.
The third way is join the club about Smart phones. In that kind of clubs, there are many people want to share their information or experience. They have same problems like you. They either join the club because of same reason. You can find useful stories by talk about Smart Phones.
So, here is my information to you. If you follow these instructions, you soon can be expert of using Smart Phones. Please don’t forget you effort. If you have no will, these whole things are not useful. I hope you to live more convenient life.
nice writing
ReplyDeletebut I recomenend try to increase suportting details
Your writing is very nice. That's why your sentence are certainly devided and that has a specific explain. also, your writing were certainly sorted to their nice points and bad points. I think that's very good.
ReplyDeleteHowever, your logs are very distracted. So, you need more conjunction particle. And your Top of title is become wrong typing, You can rewrite one spell changing "blog"to"bog"
Tyler, I agree that you need to increase your supporting details; you need to put more effort into this essay. Also please check your grammar for your thesis sentence. "to someone didn't use it before" is incorrect. Please fix.
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