Henny
30/9/2012
Watching
Movies
There are three specific ways
of watching movies. These three ways are being used for many people already.
The first way is
going to theater. It is the most common way. People can buy ticket in theater,
and watch movie in there. In these days, thanks to the technological
development, there is extra-large screen called IMAX. In addition, 4D movie which
is adding physical effect to existing 3D movie which has visual effect is
popular. This high-tech movies are more expensive than general movies.
The second way is
downloading movies in the computer. Today, due to development of IT technology,
many people download movies. This way has a merit that if people have any image
player, they can watch a movie anywhere anytime. Sometimes people download a
movie illegally without pay.
The third way is
buying a DVD. People buy a movie DVD which they want to own. Sometimes, limited
edition movie DVD is sold that is special for the movie fan. They would be
happy when they buy that limited edition DVD. Also,
this way has an advantage that people can watch movie in their home
comfortably.
All these ways give people options of watching
movies. Each ways has a strength and weakness, so you can choose most suitable way
for your type.
Hi Henny! I like watching movie so I was very interested your writing.
ReplyDeleteEspecially I haven't heard about limited edition DVD. I believed the DVD that I want to see can be buy whenever I want. It is interesting information. I knew well that IT technology was really developed through your writing. But I think your writing will be better if you fix some parts. This paragraph needs modified. "In these days, thanks to the technological development, there is extra-large screen called IMAX. In addition, 4D movie which is adding physical effect to existing 3D movie which has visual effect is popular." In this paragraph, you explained about new technological movies but I think these information is not necessary in your writing. In my thought, you should add how to ticketing for example, internet reservation or smart phone application reservation. I want to know more various method to order ticket.
I hope that my comments will be a help in your writing. bye! :)
Henny, please make your introduction and conclusion longer. Both of these paragraphs should include all of your main points.
ReplyDeleteYou have very good organization and flow. Please look for places where you are missing articles.